Date: August 12 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
I liked this chapter a lot. But, when she clicked the light switch was she turning it off or on? I liked the fact that they both wanted to spend time with eachother. Hope to see more.
Ah sorry if it was misleading, the light was being turned off. Thank you very much, will hopefully get another chapter up soon.
Date: August 11 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Really good chapter,
Poor Charles is going to have a long night.
Also you have a really good story going.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you, haha indeed he is. Thanks means a lot. I'm trying to satisfy everyone whilst actually having a bit of plot, so will probably continue in the same manner.
Date: August 07 2013 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
What happened to the Chinese?
If I was to answer this question openly the story would be ruined so just keep an eye on things, but incase you thought I may be straying off the storyline do not fear as I haven't forgotten about the Chinese
Date: August 06 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow this is amazing. I'm so glad to see this story back. I had to reread it from the beginning because I forgot it. But this story did not disappoint. Well done. Very hot an sexy story plus well written and that's rare. Hope to see more.
Haha thank you, I also had to remind myself of the plot. Don't worry there's plenty to come.
Date: February 24 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I didn't think you'd be that enthusiastic about my idea. When will the Chinese people be helping Tanya to cook a dish?
I really liked it, and I've been thinking of how I will incorporate it. It may be in the coming chapters or perhaps later on in the story... ;-) Wait and see.
Date: February 24 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
2000. An impressive number. I'll support that
Good chapter, but really Charles? That's where you hide it? I would literally strap it to my leg so nobody would guess.
Well then so be it.
I know, a little unrealistic, but after all it is a story and if Tanya hadn't of found it, it wouldn't have been such a good chapter.
Date: February 24 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
You've got it all. Another great chapter and you even managed to get in a taller Tanya which was just incredible. This is my favourite story out there at the moment and I love it to bits. If you could aim for a chapter a week that would be great! Keep going, this has got a bright future ahead of it.
I thought I'd mix it up, adds a little variety to the story. I'm so glad you and many others are enjoying it, it's very satisfying as an author. If you ask me, I'm baffled by the amount of success this story has had. To be on 5 stars is incredible and I'd like to thank everyone for that, it's been a great ride so far.
Date: February 23 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't stop writing, this is such an excellent story! And by based off of, I meant that some of the more specific elements, not the plotline are similar. Don't stop, I love it!
As long as everyone is happy then I shall haha. Ahh I see, well everything that you have read has come from my own imagination, I guess the other author and I must share similar thoughts, but I'm glad you like so much, it means a lot
Date: February 23 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
I know what story this is (slightly) based off of. But I love this one all the same. If only I could give 80 stars for this is possibly one of my 2013 faves.
Based of? I wasn't aware an idea like this had already been put down on paper? Should I stop writing? I'm glad you like it so much, I've had a great time writing it and am keen to continue with it for the foreseable future, thanks
Date: February 23 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Those pesky Chinese! Tanya should get her captives to use their cultural bckground and make her a noodle dish or something.
Now that's got an idea cooking! I hate taking aclaim for brilliant idea's which aren't my own work, but I do like the sound of that
Date: February 23 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
2 Chapters in one day! Aren't we lucky, still going great can't get enough of this story! I think the plot's fantastic and you're doing a great job! Also a little scenario played out in my head that Tanya became a giant and defended the company from the Chinese? Maybe a little too sci-fi but still that'd be great! I can't wait to see some more action between Charles and Tanya, it's been too long!
Haha that's a nice thought but yes I'm afraid a little too off on a tangent I am not willing to touch in this particular story. There will be plenty more don't you worry about it!
Date: February 23 2013 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Super quick turn of fate for the burglar. Now if the burglar was A woman... =D
This is getting really good.
That would be an interesting route to explore, think of all the things this intruder could possibly be... ;-) I'm glad you like it, things are starting to heat up a little...
Date: February 23 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nice! Really wasn't expecting that! Now Tanya has two tinies to play with haha. We still don't know who he was sent by either which makes this story all the more exciting! And the shrinking ray now, does that have a button which can increase the size of something? Or someone? ;-) Anyway great chapter keep it up!
She does indeed, perhaps another case of torturing may have to be in order... You'll have to find out later about that I'm afraid, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. Keep reading and I'll keep writing!
Date: February 22 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
In reply to your reponse to my previous review, it's your story and you really like feet I take it, so as a reader I shouldn't complain to much because others like this. I feel that I could make a handbag scenario fun, but as I said you like different things to me. I actually felt the story was fairly believable up to the point he went into her shoe.
I'm partial to the odd foot here and there. Fair enough, each to his own.
Date: February 21 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Charles looks pretty screwed. That's a fair evaluation of their situation. Or maybe not. What i'm looking forward to is Tanya's reaction. Should be fun. You're doing good for a first time story.
On the surface of things he does indeed. But who knows what will happen. Thank you very much, and thanks for taking time to review, means a lot.
Date: February 21 2013 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh and my prediction: Charles get's taken captive and is forced into selling the company to the Chinese. Tanya she's a figure run off with her bag and chases him down. From then on, no idea.
Bit obvious no? My idea I think is a little bit more, complex should we say.. ;-)
Date: February 21 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Cracking chapter, you don't how long I've had to wait, was tempted to write a review of complaint, but it was too good a story to ruin. Really liking the way you've set the platforms of this story, for your first time this is going well. Another positive is you're staying to the plot, unlike some authors who have great idea's but then get carried away and go off on a tangent. Particularly liked the reference to her weight and the car scene, adds detail. Keep it up!
Haha I know it has been a while and will try to get a rhythm going, I've just had a lot on in the past couple of days. Thanks very much glad you're enjoying it.