[Report This]Date: July 02 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Easily one of my favorite stories on this site. There are really not enough of this quality. Keep it up; you are writing wonderfully.
Author's Response:
Saf, author of stainless, well...
Thanks! I'll keep it up!
Date: May 13 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Well well, that IS an interesting development. >w> I haven't seen many stories where the tinies in the story are as devious as Alin and Carn. One befriends her, the other makes her his "enemy", and they both plot her downfall. I like where this is going, and while I hope Amanda gets through it without much trouble, I also hope she remains benevolent towards those who haven't caused and do not wish her harm.
Date: February 25 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
I would just like to say that I would have strongly preferred if her size would have been measured in miles rather than feet. Feet suck.
Author's Response:
Lol, if she was miles tall, how would she interact with all the tiny people? (Other than stepping on them of course.)
Thanks for the review Chozo! Never expected one from you. It's kinda cool that the older authors are starting to take an interest in this. You, Pixis, Malaka, sheesh who next?
But anyway, thanks for reviewing! (Sorry she couldn't be a couple miles tall, the plot clearly stipulates 400 feet and I can't stray away from the plotline can I?)
Date: February 23 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
I really like the style of this story,it is paced really evenly. The plot also makes sense and there isn't any senseless violence which really fits the characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks a whole bunch! I'm trying to really flesh out the main characters, and make a plot line because a story like this definitely needs one.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
This is cool, Im starting to take a liking to it, where before I was kind of uninterested. Its still too early for me to fully decide if I like this or not but its good do far.
Author's Response:
Aye, it is slow moving. But hey, I like to write it. Glad you are starting to take a liking to this.
Date: February 20 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
"I'llputil." Heh, clever. Homage to Lilliput, i assume? Good setup so far. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
You are correct, Sir Pixis. An anagram of Lilliput. Now what about the name of their capitol? Figured it out yet?
Date: February 19 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Seems like a fun premise. Gulliver's Travels in space, it feels like. I'm always intrigued when I see writers having a go at a first person perspective from the eyes of the giantess character, as I personally find the tone much more difficult to maintain than that of the tiny character. Good luck to you in continuing.
Author's Response:
I was inspired by recently rereading Gulliver's Travels, and oddly enough, 2010: Odyssey Two by Arthur C. Clarke. I hope to write this like a story, not the usual 'sex and slavery' stuff we see on the site mostly.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
"Et usu weu, Alctopi!", and make it snappy!
Author's Response:
Uen ibed Odengut, Wildcatman!
In other words, Thanks for the review!
Date: February 19 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Interesting premise, not really much more I can say about it, at this this point.
Author's Response:
Kind of like Gulliver's Travels. Kind of.
Date: February 19 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
I havw a feeling I will really enjoy this story, although it's probably too early to say for sure.
Author's Response:
I'm going to try to keep it a story, not veering off jnto erotica and stuff like that.