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Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 10:38 PM Title: Prologue

I like what you have so far, but I think the text could stand to be separated a bit more.

Still, 6 stars so far.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 3:06 PM Title: Prologue

The only thing marring this auspicious debut is the non-separation of dialogue and narrative. Double-space between paragraphs, dude! Especially, when the next paragraph is directly-quoted dialogue!!

I say this as someone who was initially guilty of it, himself. So, I know, whereof, I speak.

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