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Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 9:11 PM Title: A new step

Great start, but it is just a start. Really hope you continue this one. :-)

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 5:01 PM Title: A new step

Cool story, would love to see how it turns out in the future. Short nfo/background but enough to give the reader an idea of how the emotions of eahc character should play out and the significance of this event. I don't review much here because im not good at criticizing, but I want to see this story advance. A bit fast-paced, but that's ow people usually like it here.Maybe a bit more detail on describing her, but that's ll I can think of for now. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 10:52 AM Title: A new step

Oops! Misinteerpreted the plot summary. I thought it said "...a male _and_ female friend get shrunk..."

Ah, well! I'll still be here for ch. 2.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 10:49 AM Title: A new step

Hmmmmmm! I get to review first, for once? That's almost as intriguing as this opening chapter. And, by intriguing, I mean I can barely wait for chapter 2. To see how the other girl friend figures into things!

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