[Report This]Date: August 09 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, never expected that you would put the predator in a somewhat dangerous position. Nor did I expect that you would try to flesh her out beyond a lustful killing machine.
Giving her an actual past is a step in the right direction, maybe you can make the reader feel somewhat bad for her despite how cruel and evil she is.
I'm eager to see if your able to take this story beyond a fuck/kill fest, although I'm not sure if thats what your even trying to do! In any case Kudos for trying something different than previous chapters, really caught my attention with this one!
Author's Response:
She was a human being therefore a past is inherent the story grows within my minds eye its path has already been chosen imagine being this delightful creature mmm think of the fun i could have with you the thought alone turns me on beyond belief the reality would make life a wondrous place to dwell.
Men are toys to be played with until hunger calls then the real fun begins heeeee lush...
Amanda xxx