Date: March 26 2014 7:06 AM Title: Day 3 Concluded
I'm turned on badly
[Report This]Date: May 15 2013 7:37 PM Title: Day 3 Concluded
No. No. You've got it wrong.
It should more about sex! The character development is fine as it is. ; )
Great story. Many good original ideas.
Please continue - the messier and more sinister, the better.
Author's Response:
Haha, well as you are seeing, I wasn't able to stay away from the sex stuff. The next chapter will be primarily about this new woman and Ethan. Who's to say how it will go.
Thanks for the compliment and comment. Hope you keep reading
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 10:55 PM Title: Day 3 Concluded
Great story. I loved the story Lori told. And love how after all that he still wanted Marta's gorgeous feet. Can't wait till next chapter.
aaron
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're enjoying it. I'm sorry to say it will be a day or two until I can get the next chapter up. But the good news is that I will be able to do 2 so that people will have a little more to read. Thanks for reading
Date: May 13 2013 9:35 PM Title: Day 3 Concluded
Okay things feel like they are going to get complicated. Lori might not mind now, but what happens when Martha doesn't want to give him up?
Author's Response:
Yea, that's kind of the point. I want this to be something that is forced to be dealt with.