[Report This]Date: August 23 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Wow. Just... Wow. Been loving this story so far. Can't wait to see more updates to the story. Also, I was wondering if you were going to be adding more unaware to the story? Even though it wasn't a gigantic part in the story, I really enjoyed the part where he got unawarily sat on in the earlier chapter.
Sorry for that, but love the story and hope for more updates!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! So glad that you've been enjoying so far. I'm just starting to work on the next few chapters and haven't written any unaware yet. However I might throw some in there just for you. :-) Always feel free to comment and let me know what you'd like to see more of. I'm always open to suggestions. Thanks again.
Also, in the extremely unlikely chance that you messaged me on kik last week, please try me again.
Date: May 24 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Is Erin gone forever? Holy SHIT she was messed up. She scared me, literally! But I love the dynamic between Steve n Kelsey so I knew she would get him back. I hope you keep this up. I love this story. Never worry about making anything too long, people like a challenge! I'm excited for another chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so far. Erin was never a part of my original idea for the story, so who knows when or if she'll return. I have a feeling she's not gone forever, though, as she's a lot of fun to write. :-)
Date: May 15 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Ugh, creepy stuff. So Steve dies and comes back again, will he ever break out of his cycle?
Author's Response:
Oh no, him dying and repeating the cycle was a little cooler of an idea than I was intending. I really just meant that Kelsey had shat him out after swallowing him. But thank you for reading and reviewing! :-) I updated the end of the chapter just slightly in case anyone else was similarly misled. I'm glad you found it creepy, that's what I was going for.