Giantess World
Reviews For Nobody Likes the First Days of School
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed 
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Date: May 19 2013 12:12 PM Title: Orientation
[Report This]Date: May 19 2013 12:12 PM Title: Orientation
I wonder how many girls are going to break Rule 2, and sucessfully prevent the enactment of Rule 3?
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 6:30 AM Title: Orientation
Date: May 19 2013 6:30 AM Title: Orientation
The pace of the story is good. Usually people rush into things.
Here:
He didn't need to be so shy,
You have a comma instead of a .
And where it says:
Dans thoughts
You mean:
Dan's thoughts
Because they're his.
Reviewer: newschool2626 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 3:11 PM Title: Orientation
Date: May 18 2013 3:11 PM Title: Orientation
Love it! You're truly building your own world! Can't wait to see more!
Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 10:20 PM Title: Orientation
Author's Response: Thank you man. It's great to hear that!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2013 10:20 PM Title: Orientation
Alright, I'm digging this so far.
Given that you've made exposition seem interesting and compelling, I'd say this deserves 8 stars!
Author's Response: Thank you man. It's great to hear that!