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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 12:34 PM Title: The fun begins

Either Lindsey has the power of teleportation, or she has an identical twin sister with the same first name. Because, you have her both lounging on the couch _and_ sitting on a recliner (lo1!). Also, how did Lexie go from leggings to pants? Aren't leggings those thigh-high socks worn by female dancers?

Author's Response:

I find myself constantly mixing up the names of Lexy and Lindsey, and ussually am able to catch it, but i must have missed it that time. My apologies. It was Lexy on the recliner. And leggings go all the way up, and they hug a woman's frame quite well too.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 11:44 AM Title: The fun begins

 

this school sounds fun! will their be feet?



Author's Response:

Sorry man. I don't have an attraction to feet, therefore I would be unable to write interactions that would please people, for I do not know what those are like. There are a lot of brilliant authors on this site who have a lot of feet stories, such as UHF, so i recommend that if you want feet, read their stories.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 2:16 AM Title: The fun begins

You mention people turning to homosexuality, so that would mean that there's been a HIV epidemic. You'd think people would know of the dangers. It was still a nice chapter though and I think I will add this story to y favourites.

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to excited to find the words to respond. 

You mean: too excited



Author's Response: When sexual interactions are no longer available with the other gender, I don't believe people would be focused on the "dangers" of them turning to homosexuality. Plus, if they use protection they could easily avoid HIV.

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