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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Tree Burning Men

Its been a while since this was updated, anyways welcome back EricA.

I also look foward to reading that update someday since as of right now I am only on this chapter.

As for my thoughts on this chapter...

In terms of fantasy I have no interest in male giants, but from a literary perspective I found the attack on the village to be quite well written.

I thought the pace of the attack was arguable the best part. It was very sudden and brutal as one would expect from a fight between primatives.

Keep up the good work EricAfreak.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Amateur. Make sure you catch up to the latest chapter soon. I don't care much for male giants either, so turning them into the bad guys probably worked out really well for me in this regard. I'm glad you liked it so far, make sure you save some time for your own writing as well.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Tree Burning Men

Alright! An action-packed cliff-hanger. One of the best since the s.f. anime STAR BLAZERS.

Author's Response:

I feel that this chapter could have had more action. At the time I wrote it, I think I was more focused on Nobuto's character. I think he might become important later on, in the same sense Shouta is becoming important. Star blazers was actually the American dub of the anime, Space Battleship Yamato. It was censored and edited to make it into the American TV line up of the 1970's era. While I have heard of it, I actually have not seen it, other than some clips from the live action movie Space Battleship Yamato. I was born in 1987, so a lot of the anime I have seen is 90's and later, with exception to some classics like Gundam, Akira, etc that came out of the 80's.

It's funny since in the dub Star Blazers, they renamed The Yamato to, The Argo, and had other forms of censorship.

Still it's cool that you think I created a good, "anime style," cliff hanger, so thank you.

 

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