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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 Exile

I think you meant "noon sun." Other than that nitpick, however, this chapter was well worth the wait.

Author's Response:

You're correct, I fixed it to noon sun. I'm sorry I made you wait, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 Exile

 A long overdue update and it will be interesting to see what happens. Maybe Hina can redeem herself by bringing boatloads of men to the village, should be enough to offset the loss of one brother. 

 

That might make her violent towards them if they do not comply with her wishes though, it will be fun to watch. Also, Otohime could use the Japanese seamen's help in fighing off the tree burning men. I wouldn't mind living with them seeing as they know how to take care of their men. 



Author's Response:

I can't really reveal what will happen with Hina, so hopefully it will meet your expectations.

If she did go violent, who would you be rooting for? Your Otohime theory isn't too bad, but I won't tell you if you are right or wrong.

Have you truly seen enough of their culture to judge that, so far Shouta has not been having a pleasant time. If your fantasy is being surrounded by forty, 1,000 ton woman who control your every move, are overbearingly protective, and illicit sex from you at any chance. Then perhaps you might be able to overcome their longer life spans, and spending your entire life in a cage. If that's all true...

 

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