[Report This]Date: April 04 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 Bath Time
As far as I'm concerned, the two types of action in this chapter were very well balanced. Which means I'm glad I kept my promise to be here...just as you kept the similar promise on your part! :-)
Author's Response:
Originally this chapter would have been geared towards only one group of people in the story. Then I decided to merge Shouta and the American's battle into one chapter instead. Which as you said made it more balanced.
The next section will probably feature Shouta's group but focus on the Japanese fleets instead of the Americans.
Anyways I'll seeya next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 Bath Time
This is a fun chapter, I really enjoyed it. The Americans seem screwed unless they receive some aid from the Ryujin. I would say poor Shouta but that bath had its benefits no?
Author's Response:
Yay, a chapter which didn't make Shouta more unlikeable... I think taking baths have benefits. Well so far the Americans have only seen one kind of giant and it murdered 81 men. So who knows what their encounter with the Ryujin will be like.
I'm glad you liked it, and have continued to read it. I'm starting to think the story and the audience is demanding heavier smut scenes. Then again story wise, it might not make much sense or feel real if I did so this early, or at all.