[Report This]Date: August 15 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. Would it be possible for one of the tinies, maybe Amy, to ask if Claire can go over to their house and get their beer out of the fridge...
I love the emotional roller coaster Amy's going through now. Also how Claire is speaking to the tinies in regards to being unshrunk, that is a great turning point for her character because if Michael says something again about it I think she really will punish him. Like maybe she will just pluck him up right off the floor between her fingers to tell him that tonight he's sleeping with her. Lol I can dream can't I.
Seriously I loved this chapter because it builds up to what will happen so well. Nice job and I can't wait to see what you have in store next for this story.
aaron
Author's Response:
You've just given this story its 50th review! Awesome!
Haha, you and Codeman83 caught on a few chapters ago that something was up with Amy. I hope I explained her thoughts well enough in this chapter, I've been looking forward to revealing them for a while now.
Thanks again for reading/reviewing, I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Claire is only half-right. They could have been swallowed by some now-gigantic seeming animal or other had they opted _not_ to seek her help. But, that still doesn't mean what she's doing to them is right. Or, that they're "lucky." They're merely enduring the lesser of two evils; plain and simple, as that!
Author's Response:
Exactly. But try telling that to Claire, haha. Thanks again for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Even though Claire is not resizing the couples, I am glad she is being nice and not torturing them. It also seems she is quite enjoying thier company, despite the fact that all they are doing is allowing Claire to have a good time. I wonder if Claire is liking the shrunken people cause of some lonliness?
This is going good, I will look forward in reading more to come, keep up the good work!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you will continue to!
Date: August 14 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
I like how amy is envious of claire and wishes she was in her position, and claire seems to be tiring of the groups constant pleading to be restored. I'm sure she may have to demonstrate just how powerful she is again soon... great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, you and Aaron knew something was up a few chapters ago when Amy was watching Claire with a little too much interest, haha.