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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

"the sadistic children"
"as the brown mass slowly enveloped him and silenced him forever…"

I love this story. Well told and described!

 

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

Only found one mistake that really matters

“Cool, now I can understand them IN MY STOMACH!”  Jasmine said as she tossed them down her throat.


Angelica swallowed them, not Jasime, right? :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for catching that one for me.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well this is interesting. I have a feeling I know who gave Nick that hoodie...

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