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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Just when things seemed to get better they get worse, so Parker on the drug is a bit like Harry Potter? Being able to see what Voldemort is doing. I am not liking Ava, haven't read the later parts but we shall see if she can convince me otherwise.



Author's Response:

Oh wow, I didn't even think about that.  To be entirely honest, it was a little bit of deus ex machina on my part (that chapter was written a year ago), but will hopefully be fleshed out before the story's end.  Thank you for checking this out as well and I hope you're enjoying it. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

A classically twisted plot. Bravo!

Author's Response:

Thanks Cary!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hope to see more. Great story.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks aaron, glad that you're still enjoying it!

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