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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hey! No need to apologize; I frequently have my own brand of RLC's that delay me from updating as often as I'd like. That's why I try not to take longer than three months, minimum, between new chapters!

As for this newest chapter of yours? You had me going for a couple minutes, there, with the nightmare sequence. I can only hope Parker doesn't have a similar real-life encounter at Ava's school.*

*Purse riders, in general, always seem to fall out; only to wind up getting captured by some nymphomaniacal cheerleader or other.

Author's Response:

Nice to hear from you as well, Cary! Thank you again for the review.  Hopefully I can stay within that 3-month span and avoid some cliched plot conventions with the school scenes!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

...wha'- whoa!     Has it been six months?  Doesn't seem like it...  Glad to see this brought back to life!  Another great chapter, your really good with the dream sequences,  look forward to the next one... ;`)



Author's Response:

Tell me about it, Cat! It really hasn't felt like long. Thank you again for your continued kind words!

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