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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A special place

This is a good concept. and your writing style is polished so I can't really criteque it, but I'd say the one thing I would like to see is society's reaction to those with the syndrome.

Overall good job I will continue reading as soon as I get the opportunity.



Author's Response:

Thank you, appreciate you reading, and I touched a bit on society and the syndrome in the first syndrome story, and plan on touching on it a bit here.

 

 

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