Reviewer: The Count Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2022 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 9 Alternate 1

Damn man, I love this whole story, different parts for different reasons, but you did them all so well... But especially this chapter and 8, I love the foreshadowing of Mika being the health-conscious one, because of that my first thought when jar was mentioned was... 'sample collection' but I dismissed it as going too far... But no, you did go that far, and I think it's the most detail I've seen for this scenario, even describing how the experience makes him feel in-depth... Ah, it's just too good man.

I like the alternate chapters in general, allowing for a happy ending and some of the worst possible ones. Great stuff. Thanks for putting it back up, I really enjoyed it! Guess I'll have to work extra hard on that next chapter ;P

Author's Response: Thanks! Im really happy you enjoyed it all. I remember wanting to give the main story a happy ending, but didn't wanna miss out on any of the really miserable scenarios to put the protagonist through, haha