Date: September 28 2013 12:40 AM Title: Epilogue
I liked all stories very much. You were very creative in humiliation Dan experienced. E.g. how Steph played with Dan in chapter 5.
The plot was slowly developing and there was a tension what will happen next. I had a feeling that the chapter 10 is just a beginning. I was looking forward to read how Julia would slowly turn Dan into her pet and her sister Leslie would assist. I had a feeling that everything just starts.
But then you wrote last 2 chapters. In my opinion they did not fit to the previous style. I think you just wanted to end - but I do not understand why.
Anyway thanks for great reading!
Date: September 26 2013 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue
This was kind of unexpected.
Not complaining but it was kind of from left given how nice and reasonable Julia was at first or even Kat a little.
Still well done.
Date: September 26 2013 12:13 PM Title: Epilogue
[Original review revised and conjoined with prior one.]