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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

Dan's the MAN!   If Kat and Steph like to play 'strip-poker', well then Dan's already lost, but maybe they could give him a handy-cap for being so short?

This is really getting good!  I love the way that you've thrown him into this situation.  Suddenly 'TWO' girl giants are towering above him, and the Idea of his doctor being his sister-in-law....

Also, the idea of being totally at Kat's mercy, and wondering if this playful 'Kitten' likes to play 'Kat & Mouse'....

Great Stuff!   I can't wait for next chapter...   ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Heh! She went from baking brownies to instant "man-cake."

LOL!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

I can understand how anxious he might be not to become the lab rat of his ex-wife's sister. Seeing as what she could do to him, at this size, out of loyalty to her! But, then again, becoming a play thing for an apparent "free spirit" like Stephanie might not be the _lesser_ of two misfortunes, if you catch my drift.

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 5:21 AM Title: Prologue

Great story going here, you definetly got my interest Can't wait to see what kind of GTS Kat is....

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 8:17 PM Title: Prologue

I'm Hooked!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

The initial un-awareness; equally classic! :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 3:12 PM Title: Prologue

Ah! The old precognitive nightmare; classic touch. :-)

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 9:53 AM Title: Prologue

How dare you, gtswburg? How dare you post a chapter 1 with no size content? I used to think that I could trust you, but now, after this... I just don't know, okay? I need some time apart from you to think.

And you need to post the goddamn next chapter.

Reviewer: Sizescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 9:33 AM Title: Prologue

Yes, this is a really rich setup. Not being able to sleep because of women really sucks.  Dan seems very relatable and I cannot wait to see his ordeal unfold.

 

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 5:37 AM Title: Prologue

Great start! Eagerly wanting to see how the characters you're setting up will humiliate Dan. You capture NYC really well. :)

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