Date: January 09 2020 5:58 PM Title: Commotion
Oh my GOD you can't stop there! I need to know what happens next!! Please keep going I love this story and I love Caitlin-heavy chapters!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2019 9:42 PM Title: Introduction
It's always such a treat when this story is updated. Looking forward to seeing more - you really left us on a cliffhanger!
Date: December 04 2019 6:16 PM Title: Commotion
Love this story, thanks for coming back to it!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2019 10:20 PM Title: Commotion
How much you want to bet she keeps him bound and gagged inside her teddy bear from now on?
Date: November 23 2019 1:11 AM Title: Commotion
I'm worried for Jack but if he goes missing again it should be obvious who's responsible. Most of his friends should know.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2019 11:20 PM Title: Commotion
Finally, the Beast of the Apocalypse has cornered her prey ! Will she now reveal that she is madly in love with our hero, only to be stopped by super-sized Penny, leading to her injecting herself with more growth serum, starting the Kaiju Wars ?
Or perhaps she'll just torment Jack. Which is just as good !
As always, a pleasure to read you. Also, it was awesome to see Caitlin unwittingly helping Jack and showing us why ecen other Alphas fear her.
Date: November 16 2019 10:19 PM Title: Introduction
Kudos to you for fleshing out Alex when you could actually have avoided doing this for the grunts of the bully.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2019 9:17 PM Title: Conversation
That could be Caitlin's theme song.
"She ain't heavy. She's a bother!"
Welcome back, dude. :-)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2019 2:57 PM Title: Conversation
I wonder if, towards the end, things are going to get so heavy for Jack, that he ends up facing down Caitlin with this "nothing to lose" attitude. The kind of attitude that lets a hero face down an army by himself, not because he's brave, or stupid enough to think he can win, but because he has nothing left, and figures its better to go out on his own terms like a man. Jack strikes me as the kind of guy who would do that.
Date: November 16 2019 2:03 AM Title: Conversation
Glad this isn't dead
Date: September 03 2019 7:52 PM Title: Collection
I love the emotions in the scenes, you bring out Jack's despair and I think, depression. Same for Penny. I really feel for them, especially Penny. I fear the next chapter I read it'll be that she has some terminal disease. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 5:50 PM Title: Disorientation
Another plausibly emotional interlude. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 5:47 PM Title: Collection
Well, if he and his folks go to visit his grandfather, again, he'll have a perfectly legit excuse for being there. So, what could be the harm?
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 5:43 PM Title: Deterioration
Masterfully poignant interlude.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 5:37 PM Title: Respiration
So! Even giantesses can be benched for using P.E.D.'s. Interesting!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 1:17 AM Title: Collection
As always, it's a pleasure to see the story alive !
I really like how the Alphas are depucted here. The adults don't seem as rude as the teens, but they clearly lacks even more knowledge about how to interact with them. I guess that the older they get, the harder it is to remember the times they didn't tower above them ?
Concerning Penny... that girl's an angel. She is in pain, hospitalized and she feels bad about not being with Jack at school ! That some serious caring here. I also have the feeling she's have a major growth spurt soon, because of the way you described her illness, but of course it could be something else entirely.
I can't wait to know more, but I'll still do so as long as necessary ;)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2019 7:29 AM Title: Introduction
I'm problaby reading stories on this site since 2010. Your story forced me to register. You are a talented writer, you know how plan your characters. I mostly stunned by the gentle parts, I can belive that in the real world it would be something similar
The alpha&beta world is really interesting. Mostly I think its a cruel thing to make bigger persons who needs more resource on this slowly exhausting planet. But then I realised everybody in the western world is buying new phones every 1-2 years bot caring about the less fortunate nations. Im not a parent, but I think I would give the serum to my child. Even knowing its the worse thing to the planet. To bad I have nobody IRL to discuss the advantages/disadvantages :D
ps: Delon's GF must be lucky. I could only imagine what a horny boy could do
Date: September 02 2019 6:14 AM Title: Introduction
Very glad to see this one come back. This chapter feels like a re-establishment with the subplot of the grandfather and Jack's parents fleshed out but also more nice descriptions of the Alpha world outside of school.
The old writer's block can be tough, I am pleased you found your way out of it to continue this magnificent story.
Date: September 01 2019 2:08 PM Title: Deterioration
So happy to see another chapter of this story. This is one of my favorite MGTS stories. The writing is very good, I like the storyline and the character development is very good.
I hope to not have to wait so long for the next chapter. :)
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[Report This]Date: August 31 2019 4:11 PM Title: Deterioration
Your writing quality never slackens. You have a hell of a talent for communicating emotion in your scenes, whether it's fear and pain from Jack's torture, or depression and anxiety over his family issues. That last one in particular struck a chord with me.
I'm never one to tell an author how to write a story, because you know your own story so much better than I do. I do, however, have a word to say from the perspective of a reader. Jack's been going through so much turmoil for so long, I really want to see things go right with him for a change. I know he's had his moment with Penny, I loved that for the nice change of pace it was. I've gotten to know this guy so well and relate to him, I want to see him happy soon. Keep writing your story how you want it. Make Jack go through whatever he has to go through before it reaches the end, however you've got it planned. I just want to see him come out happy when it's all over.