[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part II
Welcome back! and Merry Christmas to you too!
This chapter almost feels like a christmas present.
Great chapter with lots of detail. Poor Abby, she is literally lost in there and now she has to deal with Lauren making moves unaware of Abby's presence.
I expect more dialogue next chapter, but this one had phenomenal descriptions! Especially while understanding Abby's perespective.
Cant wait for Mark's part!
Author's Response:
This is maybe the third/fourth draft of this particular chapter and I did originally have some dialogue in it, but I felt having Abby buried in flesh didn't give her much room to speak, and as for Cheryl, she was talking fine! Abby just couldn't hear her haha. But, expect much more dialogue in the next chapter!
Thank you for you kind words, and have a great holiday.