[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18: Part III
Wow, fantastic chapter!
Lauren had no idea what she was doing. Cheryl distracted her enough.
Back to back chapters. Didnt see that coming. Im crossing my fingers for a back to back to back chapter. lol
Im starting to get anxious about what Emily is doing to Mark. She said some interesting ideas from chapter 16. Everytime Abby thinks of Mark, I also think of Mark. We both want to know what is happeneing to him.
Seems like this Abby/Cheryl scene is about to end, and what a situation it was. It was intense on multiple levels.
Hoping the next scene with Emily and Mark is just as detailed, or even better!
Once again, another great chapter, and I cant wait for the next one, which might be sooner than I think. (I hope) :)
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, the next chapter won't be at least til new Year I'm afraid! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Expect more soon...
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18: Part III
Holy sex orgies batman!! That chapter was what I was hoping for and you did not disappoint. Great job. Cannot wait to see what happens next. Also loved how Cheryl's pretty feet were mentioned as in foreshadowing(one can only hope).
All in all I'm so stocked that this story is back and that we getting a lot from Abby's perspective. I of course want to see more of the hot milf(forget her name) but you just do what you do. This story is excellent and I hate for something to disrupt your rhythm.
aaron
PS absolutely loved it when Abby had to use all her strength just to escape Cheryl's vagina lips.