[Report This]Date: October 22 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
Seem in most GTS stories every woman either wants to act all motherly and caring with the small man they find, usd him as a dildo or torture the hell out of them. And of course if they're outright giants then go on a rampage and become queen of the world.
Oh and in response to your response with regards to my idea about a giantess Carly, I dont think it will be as long as your Blackmail series where the brother is shrunk since she could probably become like the ruler of the world depending on how big she got.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Carly would endeavor to become ruler of the world even if she wasn't able to grow at all. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Really Hope Things Don’t Turn Sexual With the Shrunken Guy’s Family Because That’s Gross
Although, I can't help but feel that some of this is directed at me, (Ha) it seems like your trying to get some of your frustration's out without picking on any one author...
This is a very informative and gentleman-ly way of slapping some crap back at the newbie's without picking on anyone inparticular.
Your very perspicacious Jack. I love this! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I certainly don't intend to direct the jokes at a particular author; no one, including myself, is safe from the cruel slap of satire. These are conventions all macro writers draw from at some point or another, but then again, a lot of these are the things we count on to provide the fun.
Date: October 21 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: GIANTS TALK LIKE THIS
But if Hannah knew he'd shrink, why wasn't she the person to find him shrunk? Good chapter though. It was rather funny. Will his friends and relatives go looking for him? That's something people seem to forget.
Author's Response:
Nice observation with Hannah; the fact that she shrunk him yet didn't try to find him once it happened is something that I'm going to address in a later chapter. The latest chapter I've posted deals with Jimmy's family as well.
Date: October 21 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: GIANTS TALK LIKE THIS
But if Hannah knew he'd shrink, why wasn't she the person to find him shrunk? Good chapter though. It was rather funny. Will his friends and relatives go looking for him? That's something people seem to forget.
Date: October 21 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
This is a really cool idea. This initial chapter is so elequently named. I know the first chapter in the new story I'm writing will be a 'Unsexual set-up part'. I actually mentioned the very subject of a school hallway in a review I left earlier in the week.
There are some things that really annoy me that I see in lots of stories, although often I keep my mouth shut to avoid an argument. One thing I have noticed is that the name Mike is used frequently on this site; I should know. I've submitted over 900 reviews. Plus, every other character seems to be a blue eyed blonde (often a cheerleader). I wonder if you'll incorperating these, amoungst other clichés. I can't wait to take a look at the next chapters.
Also, whenever cup size, in terms of breasts, is mentioned they always seem to be a C cup. I've never checked to see how big C cups actually are because I don't think it's necessary for me to do so. To me they are small, average, large or of unrealistic proportions (because some people like to write about or draw such sizes).
Here:
homosexual to not
I think you mean:
homosexual not to
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews. The thing with cup sizes has occurred to me as well; in the stream of a story, especially, it seems like it makes more sense to use more general terms than exact measurements, but there it is.
Date: October 17 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: GIANTS TALK LIKE THIS
Very funny. If this wasn't satire, it'd still be 5/5, since that's just how people vote on this site it seems.
Date: October 16 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: GIANTS TALK LIKE THIS
What's really weird is that I've started writing this EXACT STORY a few weeks back, only I was taking it seriously :D The hot senior girl was also called Jenna, and the guy's clothes shrank with him as well for no adequately explained reason. And there was a younger girl who found him as well. I guess you really do know how we think, lol! It was supposed to have been my next story, but it had a lot of weird things in it that probably no-one but myself fetishizes.
This story is great, please continue it.
Author's Response:
Are you implying that I'm not taking this tale seriously, sir?
*cough*
Thanks for the review. I'd feel bad for having accidentally spoofed your next story, except for the tiny chance that maybe this setback will encourage you to start writing your 3rd Fairy story, so instead I'll just sit here feeling quietly smug.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
Nice prologue, your sense of humor in this makes it very enjoyable to read. Pretty unique around here. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! More will be up soon.
Date: October 13 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
why did i just picture miley cyrus and jimmy fallon back in high school? well done.....
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
Welcome to the parody club Jacksmith. Now you'll begin seeing Macro tropes in every story you read from now on. Tis the curse of writing one of these. ;D
Author's Response:
Oh believe me, I've been seeing these things for a loooong time, but just haven't figured out the angle I wanted to take on writing a spoof of them until now. I definitely enjoyed reading yours a while back. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
Hahaha, can't wait to FAP to this. =P
Author's Response:
Warning: story may cause spontaneous bouts of uncontrollable sexing
[Report This]Date: October 13 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
Yeah I can tell the similar story line, but it is different. Glad to see your going to be a little more active.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: October 13 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip
It is shorter than what I would like but I love this! Carry on you excellent writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. The coming chapters will be longer than this one.