Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 Icarus

I really like that name "Icarus" it's different and sounds cool.

Pulse alot of questions have been answered. But now I have more.
Like why is Icarus a slave?
How will Terra react?

And a couple more but they'll probably get answered next chapter. Awesome story so far.

Author's Response: Originally his name was susposed to be Lucas, but Icarus makes more since later on. We'll probably get the answer to why he's a slave and Terra's reaction in the next chapter. Also I plan on adding a dialog explaining certain events. Thanks for reviewing and continue reading to find out!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 Icarus

I am not sure if he should be doing that to Terra's saviour, she might not like it at all! I am enjoying this so do continue!