[Report This]Date: November 04 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Penny & Origins
Aha, yes, I liked the reference :') I like it when sequels have lots of back story to tell, and explain how things happened, like a flash back. I dont know what to expect yet becuase it was all a "set up", but I noticed little hints for example "a small young girl named Cassie who loved animals". And how she has all these animals on her farm. If theres anything I could request/wish for, seeing something like someone gets vored by a stallion horse on the farm would be just awesome, like I said getting tfed into a single tiny aot meat flake for example and ending in a horse apple. I am really curious what happened with Janet, because the shampoo fall to the ground, but what happened with her, did you get tfed into that caterpiller? If so, maybe it's a very tiny caterpillar like just 1/2" to 1" long and it would be eaten by a bird at some point. But I guess Cassie and Susan will get their "idea of fun" fired back to them too at some point haha. I really look forward for the next part already so much.
Author's Response:
I guess you will have to wait and see. Thanks for the review.
Date: November 01 2013 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 Penny & Origins
Good so far, really looking forward to seeing how this develops. I'd be interested to see any unaware content too, but it's so early on I want to see your ideas develop more than any requests from me. Do your best! I'll be reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the response. I was actually worried about the lack of views, since this story has bombed in that regard, at least compared to my other penny series stories. It's good to know I have readers looking forward to more.
Then again, views are just numbers and not really important, your review means much more to me.
Did you think the first chapter was to stale? There was unaware content in the second chapter, unless your referring to a POV of Janet?