[Report This]Date: November 03 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 Hit the Showers
I am so damn happy this story is finally back. There's not much to review so far, it's "just" an introduction into the plot. But I'll give high points because I know it will be great, and I yet like the way it seems to go. Really like the half aware/half unaware idea, mostly everything will go wrong what can go wrong. I also loved the caterpiller idea, mostly also didnt "go like planed" by the girls (; Actually there were a few ideas I always wished to read, but I know you once said you want to write out your own ideas, so it's hard for people to review on this one I think. Just when I read the plot idea of "farm girl", for example one thing came into my mind, seeing a tf into a tiny oat meal flake and ending in a bucket of food for a horse, I always liked the idea of becoming a tiny unaware snack for a horse, or a bird.
Author's Response:
I told you I would get another Penny Series story out, so I hope it'll meet your expectations. If things didn't go wrong, what would there be to read? That said, the Penny has a soul of it's own, and when someone tries to use it to manipulate others, you can expect bad results to follow it's user.
What did you think of the Penny Mythos's story? Did you like the references to the previous stories in the series?
Also It's a shame that no author's have asked me yet to add to this series. I think it has a lot of potential. But most of the writers have their own interesting stories to write, so oh well.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 Hit the Showers
love where this is going!
Author's Response:
I'll try and get another chapter out soon. Thanks for your review.