[Report This]Date: December 31 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 Lunch Crush
I hope so much youll be able to continue on your story here really soon again :') I miss it so so much. I wish you a happy new year. Have a nice new years eve night!!!
Author's Response:
Hopefully free time will come up to write, now that the busiest part of the year at my workplace is coming to an end. I'll still be busy but hopefully more writing time can be alloted.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 Lunch Crush
Cassie has the makings of a future giantess sociopath. She's on the right path it would seem.
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone has noticed. Cassie is a bit of a sociopath, as your clearly starting to notice. She started all innocent, but she is gradually revealing he true self to the readers. Coming up eventually you will be able to see more of why she ended up that way, but that flashback scene is for a future chapter, I hope you will still be around to review it when I do.
Thanks again for the review, hope to see you next chapter.
As for Cassie's personality, there is a few truths we can take from it. She really does love her best friend Susan. She is very manipulative. She's a compulsory liar. She blends into society perfectly while still being able to stump out of the life of another simply for getting in between her and Susan. She has her own rules on what makes a human, human, and if you don't measure up, she will heartlessly step on you. It's not for pleasure, nor is it for a greater purpose, she simply labels certain people worthless bugs of society. A perfect target for Dexter Morgan, wink, wink.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 Lunch Crush
Hi man, this is some fantastic story so far, Im so glad I found it. I just love transformation stories, and this is just intense good stuff. Hope youll continue this soon. I will look into this and follow your stories!!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the praise. And I hope you enjoy the rest of my works.
Transformation stories seem to be a much more rare commodity in this community. Also it seems to always end up grouped with GTS stories, making them harder to find. Not that there are alot on the site, the majority being GTS content. I wish more auhtors would do them, I know there are good transformation story authors on this site besides myself. The last story not done by me, if I recall correctly was Slug by Tinyone234. It was very short, but good, if not without an innaccurate title. Still, with the amount of authors on GTW, we could sorely use some more unaware transformation content.
I wonder if anyone will ever send me a message about wanting to add to My Penny Series, I'd love to see how another author could do it. Now I'm rambling, Anyways look forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 Lunch Crush
So glad seeing another chapter!!! And noo :x please dont say there wouldnt be a next for some time, that breaks my heart :'/ And yes, totally liked how it went, and what happend to Joe and a random guy. Loved the trick prank Cassie played out and Susan has no idea at all about everything. Maybe a great way of using irony would be if one of the last M&Ms left, which would be Joe, would be given by Susan to a boy in her class asking if he could have some, which would be ironically the boyfriend of Joel or just a best friend of her. Or the M&Ms would be half empty being stored for later by Susan, Joel still under them, and later at some point the one unlucky M&M would be feed by Susan to one of Cassies horses. Totally loved the conversation at the end, that was the best of it all :') "So where is Joel?" "She said she had some stuff to do. But she left you this Susan." Cassie held out a bag of M&M's. "That was nice of her, hopefully she gets to class on time." Susan said as she ripped open the M&M's bag. "I'm sure she'll make it in time." Cassie hid her smile. Really great. Also how Cassie thought she was so clever is a great idea, of maybe in the end it backfires at her in some way. I just hope for the best that youll be able to maybe write the next chapter in between next to what you wanted to do. I am mostly looking everyday for this story aha :'p The best thing about the whole chapter was how Cassie used Joel, letting her tf herself without knowing, thinking she would do something totally different, or be part of a magic trick, that was so great. You should use this concept another time, manipulating someone in doing something with the penny and saying the word at some point, without the person has a clue what he is doing to him/herself.
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the review.
Well I have three stories which are active, and only focusing my time on one story isn't really fair to those readers waiting for new chapters for my other ones. One has been without an update for two months for example. That said, this story has been flowing out of my head nicely, and I know what direction it is heading, it will not be abandoned for too long.
Susan is getting more suspicious of Cassie as the story progresses, so I think it's only a matter of time until something has to give. Well, to use the penny as a weapon, as you have described, manipulation is really the only way. Seeing how the user has to perform a ritual for it to work. Most of my characters who have fallen prey to it have been manipulated into using the penny without their own knowledge. Honestly one of the hardest parts about writing a penny story is the rituals involved.
It's not so easy to make Joel Candy, Janet Shampoo, or Jason a Frog. I have to setup a ritual which makes sense. The penny would make an awful murder weapon, but as a tool, it's dangerous and powerful. But as the Penny itself proves, it wants to devour souls, and it has no trouble manipulating will and mending destiny to make it so. The victims of the Penny would just be far too unlucky otherwise. It even twists the soul of those who would use it's cursed powers.
Spoiler Chapter 1.
Well hell if anyone got the reference in chapter one, you would have seen it turned a benevolent ruler of Egypt, who prided himself on ruling over his people for prosperity, into Hitler. The Penny is a twisted Cursed object brought into this world with thousands of human soul sacrifices. Those wretched souls, now make up the Penny's Very Tainted Soul. Ah, but all of this was in Chapter One.