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Reviewer: Shrunken Guy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 25 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter One

I feel there were gaps in between certain of parts of this story. For example, you could've explaijned the car ride from the store to Alyssa's home.

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