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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 15: SHRINK WELL BEFORE SERVING

What about a female Cop?  If she decides to arrest a potental 'meal', should she advise him of his right's before shrinking him?

Would he even have any rights?  Oh, she could give him the right to remain 'shrunken'!  ;`)''

A whole new meaning for the phrase, "Cuff-um -N- Stuff-um", 'palm-um -N-pop-um'

-I love a giantess in uniform....  ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely, or would the cops be trying to stop the shrinking and eating of people? I guess it depends on who's writing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15: SHRINK WELL BEFORE SERVING

Great chapter title! And the narrative text certain doesn't lead to bafflement as to what the author is talking about. That being said, I congratulate you.*

*As we are now tied at fifteen chapters apiece in our current updates. LOL!

Author's Response:

Oh yes, so we are. I couldn't think of anything profound to say about your Knights of Mellion Chapter 15, so I just made a similar comment.

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