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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner For Three

I've just completed your first three chapters, and for a first story, I'm quite impressed. It runs reasonably smooth, and has no glaring inadequacies. These are the things that usually stand out greatest. Spelling and grammar are well done, and I was able to enjoy the storyline without complaint. You have the makings of a fine writer ahead of you! Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I apologize for not seeing this review sooner but I was taking a break from this site. However I'm back now and I even made a new story if you want to take a look! 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner For Three

Of course there won't be any torture, you stated the story was PG rated. it'll be interesting to see where you take and I hope this isn't one of those stories that has the potential to go on ifinately because the author hasn't trought of where or how to end it.

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