Reviewer: LatinReya Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 9:14 AM Title: Open for business

Ok! Here goes the request then!

 I've been thinking about the following scenario: The goblin zeppelin with a huge number of gnomes among other goods on board crashes somewhere in the storm peaks. Some of the gnomes try to use this opportunity to escape, and the crew is too busy to stop them...

 Is their journey to find some safe place, the gnomes will encounter giant Val'kyr who's more then capable of devouring and instantly iniscerating the unlucky gnome's bodies inside their powerful ghostly stomach to extract their souls. The souls are unable to escape and bound to spend an eternity of suffering inside their Val'kyr captor.

 But the lucky ones are able to avoid cruel Val'kyr, hungry harpies and after a long jouney they're trying to hide from the deadly snowstorm inside the cave. But the cave isn't such a good protection, and the gnomes get covered in the snow anyway. They're about to die from the cold, but... The got lucky: the huge and mighty blue-skined Vrykul warrior girl from the Brunnhildar village visits the cave in search for some Everfrost Chips and after finding one, she feels the pressure in her bowels and decides to relieve herself in the corner of the cave... Right over the snow-covered gnomes...

 After reviving the half-dead gnomes with her hot urine, she cleans them and deicides to help. The gnomes won't survive for long if left alone, so she decides to take them with her. The problem is: she doesn't have any warm bags or free pockets, so she'll have to carry the gnomes somewhere on her body: maybe between her boobs, inside her hot armpits, in her fur boots or even in her leather panties. Some of them won't surivive the way to the village, but that's not the problem for our Vrykul girl: she's gentle in a way, but she's also demanding, and the creatures not strong enough to survive her help aren't worthy of helping.

 Once she finally gets home, almost half of the gnomes are dead: one suffocated inside her armpit, one utterly crushed into the insole of her boot and it's remains are broken down by her powerful footsweat leaving nothing but the dark spot on the insole, the one trapped against her nipple got it's spinal crushed once the nipple hardened, and another one found it's way deep inside her vagina and drowned (maybe she'll leave the gnome there for a couple of days).

 The Vrykul girl feeds the survivors and decides to have some sleep after hard day in the mountains. And while she's sleeping, two of the gnomes decide to escape (the rest of them will stick with their savior). Those two will find their demise wery soon: one falls inside the bucket with the frozen berries. Vrykul girls squeeze the juice out of them with their feet (like winemakers you know). And the warrior woman who tramples the berries inside the bucket sees the gnome who somehow escaped being crushed by her mighty feet after being inside the bucket for a couple of minutes. The Vrykul thoughts about adding some spice to her drink, so, without any emotions she continues to use her feet, until the gnome eventually finds itself under one of them and gets crushed into nothingness. The girl continues to trample the berries like nothing happened... Maybe a couple of drops of her arousal from between her legs will add some more taste to the drink :D

 The other gnome almost made it to the outskirts of the village, but she gets unlucky aswell: Lok'lira the Crone (Vrykul witch) squats over the gnome without noticing it, and takes a good long piss. The poor thing won't escape the puddle, and eventually freeze inside her yellow ice tomb...

 Well... That's it for now. It's kinda too much of text :D But i hope you'll find my ideas interesting. Feel free to add or change the events, i'm REALLY looking forward to your future works!!!

Author's Response:

Alright this is to damn detailed to be just a regular request. My god you have NPC names and locations and items memorized?! Do you play WoW? And if so my compliments for remembering such things from Wrath of the Lich King, that was my favorite Expansion so far, so i can really appreciate this concept. The idea is solid and i can definitely see myself doing something like this. When i might do it however is up in the air at this point. I'm currently helping some friend with his works and working on a side project i'm trying to create. I hope that doesn't offend you that this won't be at the top of my lift but i promise you it's right up there and i do plan on giving this a go. It looks rather enticing to write about to say the least.

 

Grimahr~

Reviewer: voredom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 4:32 PM Title: Open for business

No rush at all, but I'd love to see a chapter from the pov of a gnome,what it's like underfoot, or inserted into a rear end. Maybe bought by thrall as a gift for his wife.

Author's Response:

Mmm interesting idea. I'll see what i can work out :)

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2014 2:32 PM Title: Open for business

Lots of weird stuff going in this story and thats not a bad thing.  I like popping in from time to  time to see what kind of erie events are going in in this story. Nice work!

Author's Response:

Glad to see your review thanks :)

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 2:48 AM Title: Open for business

Bouncy!!!!!!!

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 8:42 AM Title: Open for business

Very deep and well written back story! Good job! Love it

Reviewer: voredom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 9:13 AM Title: Open for business

How about a batch of gnomes being bought for entertainment at a zandalari troll meeting. Most of them are huge, even for troll standards, so seeing such a size difference could be interesting.

Author's Response:

hmm sounds like a good idea now just need to figuer out what the meeting would be about lol

Reviewer: voredom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 5:46 PM Title: Open for business

For ideas , how about something like pathfinder or D&D? Not many iconic characters, but plenty of fantasy creatures to write about.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 12:00 PM Title: Open for business

well now I have to review. I like every CH so far. Every ch is a 10/10 to me.
If I had a request it would be if u make a follow up chapter on a previous character.

Author's Response:

i might just, ive had great responces to Chi-Chi so far

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 6:14 PM Title: Open for business

I am not entirely sure what I think about this story. But it is good and I would love to see more. (:

And on an unrelated topic about your bio. That movie got a lot of people hooked myself included.

 

Anyway excellent story keep it up. 

Author's Response: Glad to hear it :D hope I can keep people interested :)

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 5:36 PM Title: Open for business

Can't wait for moarrrrrrr!! 😄