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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 11:18 PM Title: Spelunking

Interesting chapter, the title described the action perfectly.
I'm glad you balance out your story with violence and kindness. I like more gentle/humiliation, but some violence is good to spice things up.

I'm going to request a female undead character or a female dwarf, either one could be odd and interesting to read about.

Reviewer: Limn Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 10:55 PM Title: Spelunking

It's always nice to have a request fulfilled, but it's especially fun if the author does a great job which you did indeed. Keep it up :)

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