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Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 11:12 PM Title: Rainy day

I love this series, it's amazing! Try to not use all of your inspiration in one chapter, or you'll be waiting a while for more inspiration. Maybe try writing anything that comes to mind down when hire awake, and refer to it while you write? Never written before, so this is all amateur advice. Please don't stop writing!

Author's Response:

Actuelly that makes sense, i do tend to over think my chapters some time and i really should write my idea's down. Thanks for the advice.

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 4:22 PM Title: Rainy day

Holy shit, was not expected to see this when I came on here. Got to say, it was well worth the wait. Chi chi's a great character,and seeing her in a dominant role is always fun. Sorry to hear about the writer's block, it'll hopefully not last too much longer. Either way, looking forwards to whatever you decide to write next.



Author's Response:

I thank you for the review and im truelly happy you liked the chapter even if it was shorter. Also happy to see you still like my story even after such a long period ^,^

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