[Report This]Date: November 28 2007 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
i really liked it but would you be able to change or edit the ending so tht we get to see what its like from his point of view to finally and slowly get eaten by his sister
Author's Response: Sorry for late response , hill806! I see what you mean, but it's been a while now, so i think we'll let this one alone for now, I'm affraid ;-)
[Report This]Date: January 17 2007 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
WHY, SUSIE?!?!?! WHY?!?!?!?!??!!?
Sorry. But that was a frusturating ending. Ironicly funny, but frusturating. I don't... understand.
WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?!?!?!?!?!? HE WAS TEH GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Sorry angain. I mean seriously, why? Oh, well good story. Nice NIce Nice Very Nice, except the ending. *sniff*
Respond soon
ZALRUS TEH IX
Author's Response: I know,it's a tough finish :-) But it was a finish that was screaming to me " write me! write me!" and I could not resist ;-) Sure glad you enjoyed the story, Zalrus !
[Report This]Date: December 22 2006 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Dude... that ending was amazing man, to come so close and yet still fail. Wow, gives me goosebumps. Oh, and it came out of nowhere (at least to me)
Author's Response: thanks a mil, speckman, for reading and commenting my little story. glad you enkoyed it!