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Reviewer: parkeryellowstone Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 5:43 PM Title: Introduction

This is pretty good so far.  I look forward to see what you can do with it. I think it's cooler if the shrinking takes longer in a slow shrinking story but still cool.  And I like the idea of them being able to control his size maybe they make him smaller as punishment :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I agree, I don’t want him to shrink dramatically and have him handheld within the next few chapters. I want to focus on the humiliation Michael will suffer at the hands of Trish and Gracie. Don’t worry, there will be all sorts of punishments at his size.


- Midgetme

 

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