[Report This]Date: September 11 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure if you even use this anymore but I would love it if you continued its a great story
[Report This]Date: October 04 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story so far keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
That is a pretty sweet moment there, Adrian and Anna bonding over his mud covered body and how hilarious it is to her!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wait there's magic here? I did not see that coming! Well it is a good addition, glad to see their relationship has improved, hopefully it gets better over time.
Author's Response:
There is a touch of magic. She doesn't have butt-load of it like, say, Harry Potter or something. There is a finite amount that she is born with that, through practice and manipulation, she can do many things with. It is a legacy from her maternal grandmother's side.
Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story so far, sand I can't wait to read more.
Also are you going to continue some of your other stories. Like (A Charmed Life)?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for the other stories, I would really like to continue them. Right now, though, the muse on them is missing. Also, they need a major overhaul to be up to date with my current writing style. Maybe over this Christmas break I can get some writing done. ;)
Date: December 08 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
He should be afraid. Very, very afraid.
Author's Response:
Haha! He should be. But will he? ;) I'll post the next chapter in a few days.
Date: December 08 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's nice to see you back. I was wondering if you'd ever come back. Though I've never roleplayed myself, I've seen some good stories develop from roleplays, though I can't remember any others off of the top of my head. I really like this part for some reason: "From the shrill scream, she had expected a female to make its way from the plane. Instead, it was a male."
I'm glad I added you as a favourite. Will you be updating your other, currently unfinished, stories?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! As for my other, unfinished stories. I'm not sure. I would like to continue "A Charmed Life" but right now I'm kind of dry on muse for it. But I had so many great ideas for it, it was just a matter of getting to the point I could do them. Plus, the story is so old that it really needs a total overhall to catch up with my current style of writing. And I almost never go back and edit my writing, which is one of my biggest flaws. >.>;; But, who knows? Maybe muse and inspiration will strike one day and I'll get it overhauled!