Date: April 07 2014 9:32 PM Title: Getting ready for school.
Good story, though I would personally enjoy seeing a bit less one sided talking between Ben and Silva. Like, she taunts him, he responds with more than just a plea. Also, as she is a teacher, maybe she speaks with him in a more teacher like way than maternal way, which she is doing currently. Maybe you could add in a bit more than just Panties and Bra's to show a bit more diversity, and differences in each chapter?
I do like the less gory nature of the story, as Miss Silva is being much more playful than other stories similar to this one, which is a plus in my book!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Vgiv! The first few chapters were basically what I wanted to see in a giantess story and I enjoy it when the teacher is a dominant female while the student is a young boy. Usually, I find more stories that consist of a male teacher and female student. I have been thinking about adding new characters just so that the story doesnt get repetitive, and I think I understand what you are talking about. Personally, I prefer a gentle teacher with a hint of cruelty. However, as the story goes on, Miss Silva may become more cruel. The panties and bras parts are my favorite topics to explore in giantess stories, but I am adding new chapters from other ideas or by suggestions. My last chapter, "After school tutoring" consisted of mostly butt material and Im not as big as a butt fan as most people are. That chapter was based on a suggestion, and Im glad people enjoyed it. Lastly, I appreciate your interest in a playful giantess becuase that is one of my interests too!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2014 7:12 PM Title: Getting ready for school.
I gotta say, the writing styles a little rough and a bit hard to follow at times.
But overall I'd say this is an interesting story with some unique themes mixed in. Like that whole mouthwash playfulness :) That was something different.
I just think some parts could maybe be a bit more descriptive maybe? :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Alman. Yup, I admit my writing isnt that solid. I usually like to write shorter chapters that go straight to the point and this 500 word minimum limit forces me to write more which makes my stories seem like I am going too fast. As I write more, I should develop that ability to use descriptions to fill up that void in my writing.