[Report This]Date: March 15 2014 4:26 PM Title: Cold
A lot of exposition in this chapter but since it’s going to be a short side story I don’t mind too much. I got some feeling for Ashely and it already seems odd why she would mess around with a beta despite having three Omega friends. It’s shocking how fast Melody and two people Ashely considers sisters can become so serious and imposing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the exposition was kind of a coinflip for me. I decided to go ahead and exposit because I've got 4 chapters to handle Ashley in which is...not much.
There are a few things that contribute to why she did what she did. There's slight hints in this chapter, but there'll be more.
And yes, they are...not happy with her.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2014 4:14 PM Title: Cold
Very pleased to see another story with the same persons from 'consequensies'! Hope you don't forget mouthplay here as well! You're great!
Author's Response:
I am sadly not planning on mouth play for this one despite my own preferences toward it. It's a bit too intimate for me to feel comfortable doing it with Melody and Ashley, and I've mostly got things set in stone for now. Thank you for your interest and the kind words, however.