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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute chapter. I love the idea of tying a sash to Belena's finger and another around Lorek's waist. The wedding guests being on a tabletop is a nice touch too. I wonder if we'll see any other giantess-style wedding traditions. Cutting the cake? The first dance? Removing the garter to throw to the bachelors? Lots of possibilities.



Author's Response:

I'm not gonna linger on the wedding, since I want to move this story along before it takes me forever to complete. But there will be something special in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see the story starts off as a happy one. Would of kinda been mad if the golems has attacked during the wedding

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