Date: June 14 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Great chapter! Things are starting to get exciting again!
Author's Response:
I thought people would find this one boring but hearing this has filled me will joy. I'll feel even better if England beat Italy.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I wonder Jessica is facing? Godzilla? Dawn? Tucker? A bigger Jessica? Not to mention that Agent Daniel is still pure evil and we still don't know what he is up to.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Oh dear, they've found some ancient evil on a deserted planet, it might have once been very different until the cube arrived.
Author's Response:
We'll just have to wait and see
Date: June 01 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I did read about the cube, but just saying that since this arc is barely starting it can't really hold a candle to how exciting the Dawn arc was, especially towards the end.
I'm sure the arc will get better, its just right now its still mellow.
Author's Response:
Fair enough, believe me the arc will get a lot more interesting as it goes. The beginning of arcs are normally slow but they pick up pace as it goes along. Hopefully the chapter didn't bore anyone too much but it was necessary.
Date: May 22 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Aww, forgetting things! That kind of makes it seem like this whole episode was for nothing! Ahh, well, it was still fun to read.
Author's Response:
Believe me my friend it wasn't for nothing
Date: May 22 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Touching stuff, guess I better start work on my part. So she does remember what happened to her, should make things interesting.
Author's Response:
not really but it's within her subconcious so they will still be there. She may experience deja vu from time to time.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Oh my oh my, our heroes are literally running out of time. Dawn may not be much older thanks to her genes but everyone else will die. If Tucker dies before Dawn goes back then she will cease to exist.
Also, she should be horrified to be so big, people are smaller than her thumb and her regret at causing Dr. Crilly so much pain shows that she isn't evil, just like her breakdowns before when she cried over not being able to see her father.
Hope she can come to her senses and go back to her own time. Perhaps only Tucker can do it. I think I might have said this before but I'll say it again, this is much better than the original.
One last thing. The little side story I'm working on, I am targetting a June release. I have a habit of making stories go on for too long and for this one I want to make sure it doesn't drag on for too long.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Yeah things are going to be tied up relatively soon and I'm still looking forward to reading your little story. I don't mind how long or short it is, I just appreciate you writing it.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Dawn certainly has anger issues..Im not gonna lie, its a little hard to like future Jessica when were only getting one side of the story combined with her hatred of her. But Dawn IS a teenager and they arent the most reasonable people. She does have a point about Jess keeping this info from her until her father was dead...cant blame the girl for being sour about it.
Author's Response:
Yeah Dawn is a moody teenager and due to her circumstances she does have anger issues but deep down she is a nice person and hell Jessica might not be so bad.
Date: May 15 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Dang, dawn's gonna collapse the universe just to be with Tucker! Not that she knows, but the agent did tell her it was a possibility ans she shrugged it off.
Author's Response:
Yeah but if faced with hard evidence she might actually change her mind. Or she might just carry on not caring.
Date: May 15 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Oops, I meant Tucker. Yeah Jessica isn't doing anything for awhile.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, it's a simple mistake.
Date: May 10 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I didn't say Jess was a terrible parent, just that being a single mother didn't cut the mustard when raising Dawn. Anyway, I looking forward to what's gonna happen next, Dawn certainly is an interesting enough character...
Author's Response:
Maybe that's so, you can understand that raising a girl like Dawn would be extremely difficult for a single parent. Even one with Jessica's size. Unfortunately now is the end of the daily updates, GTS world is up to date with the story so now the chapters will on average come once every four to five days.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
The fact that Dawn turned out like this means that Jess alone wasn't cut out to raise a child. Its obvious that having a father in her life would have made things better. And I can't really blame her for hating Jessica, especially if what she's saying is true...I can't imagine what it must feel like to finally discover who your father was only to find him dead already.
In a way, the future she comes from is even more bleak than the future she made up...At least in that future she KNEW her father before he died a hero. And it's obvious that this reunion isn't going to last though, the universe is already ripping itself apart from Dawn simply existing in that time period!
Great stuff, I can't wait to see where this goes, I definitely got the feels in this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read but I don't want to give the idea that Jessica's a bad parent. She may have had a good reason for not letting Dawn know until she was old enough (You'll find out in future chapters). Maybe her hatred for Jessica isn't just because of the whole Tucker issue.
Date: May 08 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
It feels like the original was more about the lovey-dovey stuff between Tucker and Jess, whereas this is more about the world aroubd them. I cant really lean one way or another yet since this isnt finished...Plus I was a lot younger when I read the original, so my tastes and reading level were different.
Date: May 07 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Awesome! Im glad Dawn made it into this rewrite as well, although not in the way I expected! At this point this may as well be a new story because I dont have a clue whats gonna happen next!
Author's Response:
Do you prefer this or the original? It's nice to do things differently since it allows me to improve where I felt the original lacked.
Date: May 06 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
O_O I dont remember THAT happening!
Author's Response:
I wanted to have some new stuff in there so that fans of the old story wasn't just reading the same thing again
Date: May 06 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
It looks I will have to start soon, looking at the rate at which you write.
Author's Response:
Again do it in your own time mate. I just appriciate you writing it.
Date: May 04 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
@gadget, I see it as self-defense and those girls deserve it anyway and at the time she didn't know the true extent of her powers.
Date: April 30 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I already read this story, totally, on writing.com, as a simple visitor. But I did it, and appreciate it. I prefer gentle giantesses, and you're a master about gentle giantesses stories. I think it !
I don't know if additionnal content has been added at the original version, thanks to tell me. If yes, I'll read it.
Author's Response:
Yeah there is a LOT more content and I really hope that you do read my story.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Really digging this rewrite! I especially like how indepth your going with certain aspects such as Jessica backstory! I don't remember there being quite as much detail into her back story and the mechanics of the superpower serum in the old one! Great stuff, this was one of the fans back in the day and I'm loving everything you've done with this one so far!
Author's Response:
Yeah I wanted to expand it and there will also be a prequel/short story series to enjoy soon. But first I'm writing a fantasy series with Jessica and Tucker which I will start writing when I've finished this series.
Date: April 28 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
IIIIIII totally remember reading this when it was on writing.com!
You're the reason I got into writing, and my Ant Boy stories were inspired by your giant girl and Spiderman stories!
Loving the rewrite keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my friend. I'm glad that I inspired you and don't forget to rate the story.