[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
It seems like this is only the beginning. After what his sister told him, maybe he'll try to get into the care of another woman?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! A new chapter is in the works
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work! you've set up the plot and characters very well
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. I really like it when Women dominate men by using their natural bodily scents and tastes. I also like that the mother is still a bit conflicted about using him in all these dirty ways. Creates some suspension when she will finally not be able anymore to hold back.;P
Hope that it will gradually get more extreme though and not jump to the most extreme stuff immediately. Makes it somewhat more believable in my view.
Maybe let him get used to the smell and taste of her sweaty feet more first... let him maybe even lick clean her sweaty armpits (because she has forgot her deo and she claims its an emergency.;) ).
Oh and I like that he is not that unwilling. Meaning he gets turned on by this treatment. Imo that makes the story also more "real" in that sense that it helps the mother (and sister maybe) to overcome their limits since they just use him like he likes it anyway. :)
Another idea could be to introduce other females. Maybe e.g. a female psychiatrist the mother attends after using him as living dildo for the first time. Instead of getting her out of it she could strengthen her in her desires... and might even use him too (so she can properly judge how the mother must feel like. ;P )
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback and suggestions! I'm trying to walk the line between it being semi-consensual, in that Luke is being taken advantage of but undeniably is enjoying it despite his reservations. It's a bit tricky to find the right balance sometimes. Chapter 4 is being worked on now and I hope to have it out relatively soon.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing. Please keep going and going! This story is one of the most promising on the site.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
You are a brilliant writer. Please keep it up. Been a while since we had one like this on the site. Drag it out. Lol
Take your time and don't forget the feet. :P
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Chapter 4 is taking shape
Date: February 15 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved where this story was going when I first read it and chapter 3 has not been a disappointment, excellent chapter can not wait for 4, love the building of the anticipation and Luke's reluctancey, hate it when its just all oh your tiny let's have sex, ok, you have nailed the build up perfectly great work
[Report This]Date: February 15 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Omg!!! Please more ass ASAP!! I NEED this story!! And the length of each chapter is just fucking amazing!! And the detail is just awesome!! Pleas update soon!! I must have more booty!! I must have more of this story and fast!!
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!
One of the best incest stories written.
Looking forward to Chapt.4.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
To me, it doesn't matter if it takes a bit longer to get chapters out, you've created a quality story. Definitely enjoying it so far!
Author's Response:
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Thanks! Progress has begun on Chapter 4 now, so hopefully I'll have something out soon-ish.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful surprise that this story continues. Look forward to the coming chapters
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice to see this story being continued it was a really good read :) kinda feel sorry for Luke though ir will be interesting to see how long he can survive with out anything to bad happening to him haha.
-frankie
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review! More chapters are in the pipeline :)
[Report This]Date: January 20 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed reading this, great set up. Is the story going to continue though? would be a shame to see it end before it's really begun.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The new chapter is out!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my... We really want to see where this is going. I'ts been too long
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry about the wait. Part 3 is about 70% done, I've just been very busy over the past few weeks. Rest assured I will release the next chapter in a few weeks. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a nice start! I really like this story. When will you continue? Plz don't let this die. So many good and unfinished stories on this site. Don't let this be another one : )
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews and sorry about the delay! The next chapter is in the works, hopefully it won't be too long before I've got it ready to post.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Congratulations on the start of a great story, I'm really liking your writing. If you are open to suggestions, I think you could explore some more maternal themes.
Just my $.02. Great job so far!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is pretty good stuff.
Date: April 26 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
loving the story so far cant wait for the rest. i would like to see some of the son being found in his moms underwear, like he gets caught in it by accident and she discovers him when shes somewhere public and cant really put him anywhere else till she gets home. some drunken mom could be fun too. introduction of overweight grandma woud be cool too, however from what you have so far i know i will enjoy anything you come up with
Date: April 24 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start! Luke should be alble to survive on only breast milk, which plays into the infant role and increases their control over him. I also like the bondage idea where Luke is attached to or immobilized by different giantess body parts. After all, the world is a dangerous place and they are only doing it for his own protection.
Date: April 24 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
The second chapter was really good!! I know there wasn't any real action in it but it still had me on the edge of my seat! So far really REALLY good! Keep it up... Also keep it long :)