[Report This]Date: April 24 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Incredible chapter, I'm a big fan. Just would love to see Anne abuse her son a little more as the story develops but I love it.
Date: April 24 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok so you could make it so that his mother tells Margaret to take care of Luke while she goes to the toy store and buys a toy bed along with a bunch of other things to help him adapt to his condition. Margaret starts to tease Luke, though she always watches out so he doesnt get hurt and watches tv with him stuck in her cleavage, because she wants to tease him while also comforting him. He then falls asleep in there after struggling and margaret decides that from now on she will make him stay with her and put him there whenever she can
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Incredible start. PLEASE don't let this die.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I like the way you're taking your time to put all things giving the scene-setting.
Perhaps now you could write about how Margaret is gonna do some fart torture on her little brother... like farting on the pillow he sleeps etc etc ETC!!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter! The setting was set beautifully to allow many possibilites for upcoming chapters.
As for suggestions, you already seen what I wanted from my past review which you enjoyed. However, you are receiving so many suggestions that it may be hard to choose.
To help you out, maybe you could combine what Wizard and Rygar said. Have a bit of insertion with a lot of involvement with the undergarments. The mother could 'protect' Luke by using her bra, or even better, her panties as protection from the world and maybe the insertion could happen by accident becuase of Anne's irresistable arrousal of Luke's presence in her panties.
Or if you really liked my idea from my first review that would be perfect. You could add what Rygar said about the sister using her bra to trap Luke, but then Margaret notices Luke staring at Anne and Margaret is jealous. She ties and gags him up and secretly puts Luke on Anne's panties in her panty drawer which then Anne has an unaware moment and Anne puts on the panties with Luke inside it, and Anne feels a soft bump and rubs herself, and then you could add what Wizard said and Anne accidently inserts Luke inside her in the process of Anne ready for an orgasm.
Lots of possibilites my friend!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This second chapter was great, keep up the great work and i can't wait until the next chapter. I hope its soon also.
Date: April 23 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Id love to see him get trapped in his sisters bra as her teasing him or something along those lines
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story! Expect soon to continue
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love where this story's going. I'm a big fan of insertion myself--I'd love to see that worked in eventually :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'm sure some insertion content will make it in as the story ramps up :)
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice! You definitely have found your calling.. Sir! Can't wait to see where you take us with this tale of twists. ;`)
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be a few days now before the next chapter is ready, but I'll try not to make you guys have to wait too long
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. Make the mother and sister go all 'He's so adorable!" and treat him like a little kid, for example his mother kissing and tickling him all the time, and his sister wanting to cuddle and tease him, while occasionally they will get horny and perform more sensual actions, like licking him or using their size to their advantage as well as ask for massages.
Btw I know that Riesin means giantess in german
Author's Response:
Hah I was waiting for someone to pick up on that! Thanks for the suggestions, I'm sure we'll see plenty of that sort of content as the story gets on :)
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you getting paid to write this? Haha. Im kidding. Its just that this story is fantastic. Everytime I had a question, it was answered later on.
As for suggestions, Im a fan of insertion, panties entrapment, bondage of Luke, bra entrapment, forced pussy licking or breast sucking. Or any mix of those ideas. Also, I prefer these activities to involve the caring but sexual motivated mother.
A common theme that I enjoy reading in cruel daughter, caring mother stories is when the daughter(Margaret) wants to see the guy(Luke) suffer and be humiliated so she ties and gags Luke and tapes him to the mother's(Anne's) panties in her panty drawer. Or Margaret makes Luke look like a sex toy, and Anne uses Luke without her knowing.
Just a few suggestions, but I know you will write well whatever the topic of the next chapter will be.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind feedback and the fun suggestions! All of those sound great hahat - I've still got a fair bit of scene setting to do but I hope to feature at least a few of those themes in chapters to come!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story!
I love this theme.
Looking forward to the 2nd chapter.
Author's Response:
Cheers!
Date: April 22 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must agree with Jay post, keep the ass and also try to include some smelly feet and swampy socks of his sister after school sports or hisr mother after a hard job on yoga...
Also It would be really epic if you start the mother action as 'unaware' style making his mother like the sensation of her son at her mercy little by little.
And with his sister totally the opposite, she would love to torture her brother with many creative ways..
Realy man you did a hell of a chapter there, I'll be following this whatever you do!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind feedback! It definitely helps with the motivation to continue writing. I don't know exactly where the story will go yet, but I'm sure we'll see some of what youmenti oned above make the cut as it progresses :)
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love for you to keep this story going untill the end. Thank you for making a great story and if you could put in an unaware chapter in here too it would be much oblige. Thanks for reading this if you do.
Author's Response:
I'm sure some unaware content will make it into the story :) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really appreciate your writing style and dedication to detail. I hope you continue this and really make this kid a tiny toy for his mom and sister. I don't mind ass but sincerely hope, even if it's not your thing, you include some devestatingly smelly foot scenes. Being an inch tall and forced to smell ass, immediately followed by feet, would teach this kid how weak he really is.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - I'll try to have the next chapter up soon!
Date: April 22 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
HOLY SHIT!!!! This story is the best I've read so far!!! I'm a big fan of every thing that is in here... The detail is amazing!! Keep the ass action and fart action going!! This story is simply amazing!!! I can't wait for more work please keep this going... If this story stops here I may cry!! Don't change anything you are doing..this is pure gold!!! My only request is to keep the chapters long and full of ass and gas lol thank you so much for this story!! Update regularly!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. I say put the next one on here tonight!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to get the next chapter written tonight! Plenty more of the same to come, though I still have a bit of scene setting to do also
[Report This]Date: April 22 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
This seems really good. I'm just a little apprehensive about the more vulgar tags etc. toilet. Its just not my thing, but you have an excellent writing style.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Yeah the toilet stuff definitely isn't for everyone, and I'm sorry to say there will be a bit more of it coming in this story as it progresses - just a bit of forewarning if you continue reading :)