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Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

Can't really remember what I had said in the other review...

Other than:

Mouth play = Awesome

and

New Format = Perfect

Excellent grammar and I also didn't notice any spelling errors. Although, in a chapter that hot, I seldom look for such things.

 

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