[Report This]Date: May 09 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nick is shrunk (What a surprise)
Very interesting story idea, totally looking forward into it. I always liked tf ideas, especially things like turned into a tiny fly or bug. I also like unaware plots, with an unfortunate "unhappy" ending, so I hope for the best. Even though you wrote you wanted to have male interactions limited, I thought it would fit perfect into it, boys normally hate flys even more and try to exterminate or play pranks with them. I also would like an ending where the "fly" ends in the stomach of a larger bird for example. So I like the concept of this story a lot, it's different from the normal stories written on here. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! I did a couple transformation stories a while ago, and even thought they were terrible, i did like writting them. There just a lot of potential, so many things you can do!
But with the 'unhappy' ending thing, i was trying to make this story with more of a happy vibe to it. I been doing a lot of brutal and violent stuff, so this was going to be my change of pace.
I like the bird idea. I was thinking about putting in some animal interactions, but wasn't sure about what people's reactions would be. I'll squeez it in if i can.
And i'll think about the giant boy thing. Might include a little giant action, but not a lot. Like i said in the story, been doing a lot with that in my other story.