Date: December 08 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 45
I still enjoy this story very much and I'm glad you're still updating it. Of course you're gonna get some critism but I hope it doesn't dissuade you from writing or changing your ideas for subsequent chapters. Your chapters are always lengthy and your writing is absolutely beautiful. It's not hard to tell that you've also put a lot of thought into worldbuilding. I personally find the idea of a serious medieval-like world like this being tormented by two giant bratty girls a bit humorous and, if I may ask, where did you get your ideas and/or inspiration from?
Also, I think I'm going to donate to your Patreon. A writer of your caliber deserve more appreciation.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. I didn't take this criticism very hard because these guys have clearly only read parts of a few chapters, or even less than that. What urks me is that they more or less predicted where the plot was going next, to some extend anyway. I had written it already, but now it may look like I only want to please them, which is not the case. The inspiration for this comes from doom metal, a bunch of computer games I used to play and a table top game that before did not have an English version, but got one somewhat recently. Thank you for your support.