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Reviewer: Kyntus Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you. It was a good history.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

All I  can say is...stay true to the story and take your time then. 

Reviewer: MrTiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

One of the best detailed and thought out stories I have read on this site for a long time. Stories on here are getting better, and this one is one of the best. Grats

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just to say I can't wait to see the sequel of " Who's Really the Bigger Person Here?" 

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

In contrast to what I see in other reviews, I think you did an amazing job at forshadowing his depression. Granted I was reading it as more of a Manic-Major Depression illness. Your hints were no more or no less subtle than the hints you would get from a real person suffering from depression. Maybe that's why others have had a hard time picking up on the hints. Unless you've had depression or known someone who has0 or simply studied it, it can be incredibly hard for someone to notice the signs. And like I said before, you really are an amazing writer. You have the tallent to be getting paid to write. Hell your stories are so good I'd even recomend them to friends who aren't into the gts thing and have no doubt they'd still enjoy them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews, but I must be honest. My whole style of writing is one big rip off of Jim Butcher, my favorite author. At least I used his style to tell this story.

 

But thank you especially for understanding the subtle hints for Peter's depression. I do not have it myself but I'm very close to a friend who lives with it. On first meeting them you'd never be able to tell. So I put more thought and care into writing out a depressed character than I have with any character before.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cheesy? Yes. Terrible? Far from it, this has been so enjoyable to read that you've nothing to feel bad about. I can't wait to read the concluding chapter in this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you Nostory, who has been encouraging me from the beginning. And you'll be happy to know that, after this I'm going to start the sequel to Who's Really The Bigger Person Here.

Reviewer: Bravado Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn it man! You made me want to cry! Stop being such a good writer! I'm kidding of corse, seriously, you are amazing, please keep writing stories, I love them, I'd even be willing to donate just so some money could go to a good cause, your brilliant story telling



Author's Response:

Hahaha. It means a lot that you're willing to pay me but I'm not doing this for money. I do this solely for ego-inflating compliments to help satisfy my narcissism.

 

Just kidding. I'm here because I love to stretch my imagination and write about it. But I'm not as good as you think. Check out The Dresden Files book series by Jim Butcher. You'll see I'm pretty much copying his style of writing. Only he does it a lot better than I do.

Reviewer: Bravado Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

This thing just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait to see how the girls will act when he wakes up, keep up the fantastic work!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Whelp, things hace gone off the deep end. I guess I should have expected some crazy supernarural power at work considering all that has happened up till now!



Author's Response:

Yeah I knew it was going to be stupid so I tried to drop as many hints as I could that magic was going to be involved. That way no one could accuse me of being a lazy writer that just made up some bullshit explanation because he needed an ending.

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is as about as realistic as you can get when it comes to shrinking. their not treating himlike an object, he has a foot fetish but neither the main character or the giantesses have gone crazy with it and he's dealing with stuff a tiny man might encounter, both psychologically and physicallly. Bravo!



Author's Response:

"Realistic?" Then I suppose I owe you an apology for my latest chapter, chapter 16

 

But thank you for the kind words on everything before that.

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is as about as realistic as you can get when it comes to shrinking. their not treating himlike an object, he has a foot fetish but neither the main character or the giantesses have gone crazy with it and he's dealing with stuff a tiny man might encounter, both psychologically and physicallly. Bravo!

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm.. Excelent chapter and you got me thinking. Actualy a few things that Peter has said, thought and done have me thinking. I'm starting to wonder if Peter has a Manic-Depressive Illness (aka Bipolar Disorder). In an early chapter Peter refers to hitting his first wall. He talks as though he is on a medication but due to his current situation is now without it (but never flat out says medication I'll admit). In another chapter Peter mentions that he is keeping an even bigger secret from Emily and is afraid of how she would react to learning it. On multiple occasions Peter has shown him self to act impulsively and maybe even recklessly at times. He seems like a very active and creative person. He generaly is calm and collected but can get aggitated and irritable. 

Since fighting the spider however he seems like a slightly different Peter. Which is understandable given the enormous stress he was under and his lack of sleep as a result. He seems more quiet, reserved and maybe a little anti-social. He also doesn't seem to enjoy things he would normaly enjoy (painting Emily's toe nails). Again understandable and really not that different. Not until he take offence to the prank with the spider and Emily saying "small thing" anyway. From there you see a major mood change in him and see him bottle up his emotions until it all comes out in a big explosion. Durring his explosion his thoughts express anger, guilt sadness, sellf loathing, loneiness, hopelessness and ultimately morbid sucicidal thoughts that lead to a suicide atempt. 

I say attempt because you say this isn't the end and I trust you.  So yea this is what this chapter has got me thinking about. To be honest when reading his thoughts in this chapter I thought that Peter was having auditory hallucinations. Assuming Peter does have a Manic-Depressive Illness and did have a major depressive episode, I would assume it was brought on by the stress with the spider and his lack of sleep. 

All that being said I could totaly be way off base with all of this and am simply way over analyzing all of this. Regardless as to wether or not I am right or not, it once again goes to show  how gifted and tallented you are as a writer. You truely have a gift at writing charaters who don't feel like characters in a story, but feel like real people. 

As always, looking forward to your next chapter :) 

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

A great chapter and a situation that has been sorely lacking in all of the GTS stories.  How much can a little guy take before he breaks and tries to kill himself?  I agree these are some of the nicest giantesses we've seen, and providing he survives the attempt, can be very helpful in his recovery.  I imagine he and Emily probably won't be speaking to eachother for awhile, but I have hope that they can patch things up.

Reviewer: Bravado Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, this is by far the greatest story on this site, other then your other story, "who's really the bigger person" man I love your work, I'd seriously pay to read your stuff, now as for this story, you did one of the things I've always wanted to see happen in a giantess story, the main character attempt suicide, now im not a cold hearted bitch so don't think like that, but I've wanted to see someone in his situation finally break and take himself out, now im probably guessing a girl saves him and the story goes on, but still, thank you for being such a great writer

 

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry I meant to click on 10 out of 10 instead of 9

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow you got me engaged from the first chapter and I just read it all through today. Great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: False Shepard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man oh man you have quite a talent my friend. You really have a way with words. I have enjoyed every chapter so far, but I gotta say this was my favorite so far. I love the way the characters are interacting with each other. Can't wait to see where you take this one!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

 Wait then how is it that guy didn't hear him or even see him? Or is Peter just lucky he didn't look. 

Reviewer: ChristianPlaysMCraft Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Keep it going love your writing, it has inspired me into making my own story. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Wow, never expected to hear that from someone.

Good luck and thank you.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Maybe only Emily and her friends can see him but this is creepy, how many people can't see him? This is definitely some sort of magical force at work.



Author's Response:

Well because of Emily's mom we have proof that anyone can see him. She simply thought he was a bug because she was without her eyeglasses. 

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