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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

First off; Emily could be mischievous and still be pure of heart. After all; nobody is 100% perfect! And, if Emily and company are gentle and unselfish, more often than not, then that Zulu legend could still apply to Pete.

Which brings me to my next nitpick; if that stranger couldn't see or hear him, what makes Peter think Tim would be an exception to the rule? Especially, if Tim is an immature shit-head more often than not!

Still, I suppose it's better to err on the side of caution. So, I'll give this installment a nine, instead of the originally planned eight. ;-)

Author's Response:

Now the stranger didn't hear him . . . I never said he was unable to see him. There are in fact numerous reasons why Peter went completely unnoticed by that guy. But that man was entirely capable of seeing Peter, just like Emily's mom.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sigh. I guess it was a matter of time, before a normal sized guy showed up in this story. At least he didn't see our shrunken hero. (I guess hero is the word to use) 

I see he's paying the price for that tickling.

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