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Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2018 8:27 AM Title: Walking Home

have you stopped writing because there is no story so far 

Reviewer: Silverfish56 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 7:12 PM Title: Walking Home

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! Just there was a little bit of an overdose of the word panties at the end

Reviewer: allwaysman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 4:11 PM Title: Walking Home

Looking like the start of a good story. Keep plenty of details and keep him small plenty of places she can hide him that only awere to her

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