Date: June 20 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
I really like the romance in this, especially with Ash <3
This story is the perfect one I've been looking for. Foot action, romance, some humor and gentleness. I really love this story, keep up the good work.
Some things I didn't like was the interaction with ms Wundt and Suzie's anus, but that's just me being picky.
Oh and one last thing, your emphasis on Ash's blue eyes have given me a slight obsession with girls who own such orbs of beauty. C:
The very point of having 4 story lines was for the reader to choose and read only the ones they like. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: January 17 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Between 2 Girls
Stick with Ashley, Sam! You don't want to prove Julia right. Do you?
That was fast!
I just noticed some mistakes in this chapter and fixed them. Sorry you had to read that =D
Well let's hope he does!
Date: December 26 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Getting Wet
Both stories are excellent and well-written. I especially like the Tina/Suzanne route, as I like the sexual nature of it. I like the whole revenge theme where Tina is his ex and he dumped her, and now Sam is helpless in her possession.
I'm excited about Suzanne coming over to Tina's--it's the best thing that could happen to the reader. :) All I can think about is how awesome Sam's last encounter with Suzanne was--down on the the board game, and then he's dwarfed between her pink socks, and she smiles down at him. Awesome! There's so much potential in this Tina/Suzanne/Sam threesome. And it need not just be physical. I really enjoy the dialogue you write, emphaszing their size and power differences--like Suzanne did simply by standing over Sam. Btw, I just started reading this story a few days ago.
If you're unsure of what to write... a creative game played by the three of them is a possibility--but write whatever you want. Really enjoying it.
Thank you very much for the feedback, I'm glad you like it :D
Yes I myself like those parts too! (the ones that imply just how small Sam really is compared to them)
I encourage you t read my other story as well (tough it's not finished) if you enjoy a more violent theme.
A game sounds like fun, I'll certainly consider it if it fits well in the story, thanks!